Writing Product Copy

The convention for titles, descriptions and the rest of the copy fields on a product.

Title, description and the rest

Title

WriteGet
"Duke" Outdoor Wall Mount — Black Iron & GlassHeading, plus Black Iron & Glass as a small label after it
"Duke" Outdoor Wall Mount - Black Iron & GlassOne long heading — a hyphen does not split it, it must be a spaced em dash ( — )

Sentence case. No ALL CAPITALS. Model name first, then what it is, then colour or size after the dash.

Description, Romance copy, Feature bullets, Meta beam

FieldWhere it showsLengthWrite
DescriptionThe Description tab60–100 wordsThe full factual account, in sentences — material, size, function, power, what it takes to run
Romance copyUnder the title, read by everyone2–4 sentencesThe reason to stock it. Lead with the most useful fact
Feature bullets“What's included”5–8 linesOne fact per line, most important first — only 6 show
Meta beamThin row under the bullets2–4 linesLabel : Value, one per line

Meta beam — how the line is written

What you typeWhat appears on the page
Power : 1800 WPOWER above, 1800 W below it
Capacity : 10 LCAPACITY above, 10 L below it
Bulbs : E26 (not included)BULBS above, E26 (not included) below it
1800 WNo label at all — just 1800 W, because there is no colon

One entry per line. The word before the colon becomes the small grey label; everything after it becomes the value. Two to four entries is right — it is a glance, not a second specification table.

Live example — the "Duke" wall lantern:

FieldText
DescriptionThe "Duke" is an outdoor wall mount built from weather-resistant die-cast iron and glass. At 20 cm (7.87") wide by 30 cm (11.81") high, its glass panels cast warm, even light across entryways, patio walls and small building façades in a black finish. It takes one E26 standard medium-base bulb up to 100W (bulb sold separately) and is a hardwired 120V outdoor fixture. Backed by a 1-year manufacturer warranty.
Romance copyAn outdoor wall lantern in die-cast iron and glass, 20 cm wide and 30 cm high. The Duke gives an entryway, patio wall, or small façade warm, even light, and its weather-resistant body is made for outdoor use. Takes one standard E26 bulb up to 100W, sold separately.
Feature bulletsWeather-resistant die-cast iron body with glass panels, in a black finish. · Fixture size: 20 cm (7.87") wide × 30 cm (11.81") high. · Takes one E26 standard medium-base bulb up to 100 W — bulb sold separately. · Hardwired 120 V outdoor wall fixture. · Backed by a 1-year manufacturer warranty.
Meta beamBulbs : E26 (not included) · Voltage : 120 V · Material : Glass

Description is the complete account, behind a click. Romance copy is shorter and read by everyone. Writing one and pasting it into both wastes the more valuable slot.

Title, Description, Romance copy, Feature bullets and Meta beam all need French. Apps → Translate & Adapt — see JES-FR-01.

What these fields produce on the site

Feature bullets render as the
Feature bullets render as the "What's included" list. Only the first six appear.
Meta beam renders as the thin label / value row.
Meta beam renders as the thin label / value row.